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Reviews For Utopia
Reviewer: Lady-Rin Signed Date: 23 Jul 2013 01:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: Lester Signed Date: 08 Dec 2012 07:59 AM Title: Prologue

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Reviewer: Princess Destiny Signed Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:07 AM Title: Prologue

I really liked Chapter One and will keep an eye out for the next one!  The characters and the futuristic setting is quite fascinating, the way you've written them.

Reviewer: Princess Destiny Signed Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:02 AM Title: Prologue

It's quite an interesting start. I hope to read more soon. :)  Did you mean to have the Chapter double spaced?  Make sure to  seperate the speech, as some of them are on the same paragraph as the previous person.  The punctuation is a little off in some places also and you need to put capitals in the beginning of the speach, but it's nothing major.  You might want to put a description of Selene in the next Chapter, because you did describe Adele, but not her. 

I hope this helped and look forward to reading the next part!



Author's Response: Thank you very much for your words of encourgement and crtique. Yes i did mean to double space and did the dialogue that way on purpuse. Its a force of habit from my english teacher. The dialogue from reading so many books. I will do my best to catch the ones i didnt start with a couple letter, thank you once again!! I truly mean that!

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